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Question: This is my first Trigee!. This of course came with some patriots ideas =)!. What do you think!?
The land of the free!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.The home of the brave
But for how long!?!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.But at what cost!?
It's up to us!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.And choose we must
To bless this land!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.To do our duty
To honor our fathers!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.To be great again!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

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This is as good as any Trigee I've seen on this site!. You sir are a true patriot and it is your spirit that gives America its greatest hope for the future!. Bravo, and congratulations on what is most assuredly a Trigee and a statement about what is good and true in Man!. Thank you for reminding your readers that the price of freedom is truth, valor, and sacrifice, which take many forms!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

The form is fine, it reads well, the content is meaningful!. but it reads like a cliche!. It was just OK for me!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

And you hit a grand slam on your first try!.!.Very Patriotic also a reminder of Freedom is not Free!.!. We ALL must sacrifice Someone or Something to keep our Nation strongWww@QuestionHome@Com

Fantastic success on your first Trigee!
Perfectly done with a message that needs to be heard!.
Thank you!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

This is not my favorite form to read,
but for the message held within yours
it was an honor to have done so!.