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Question: Help with writing poems and just things!?
so i like writing and i don't think that I'm that good!? i just wrote this about 2 minutes ago it's something that just popped in my head!.

i live for these crazy moments we have!.as long as
i have you i'll always be glad
through the light or dark
you'll always have my heart
i just hope you see
how much you mean to me
never giving up
& never giving in
i'll always love you
until the very end!.

But if you have any pointers please help!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
When I write things like that, I usually end up wanting to make it more poetical for the harsher critics!.!.!. which is an annoying reason to do such a thing!.

Living through these crazy moments;
Sad & glad from bad and good omens!.
Switching to and from light and darkness
Mad that it's hard to understand this heart!.

I hope that you care, I hope that you see!.!.!.
Just know, you mean so much to me!.
I refuse to run when the problems come!.
Choosing the hard way: not giving up!.

Even when we don't seem like friends;
I'll love you, on my way to THE END!.Www@QuestionHome@Com