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Question: Have you ever felt angry!?
Untitled Rant
by C!.S!. Scotkin

Lack of human feeling,
save your twisted braid
of scorn, haughty
self absorbed anger
when others dared
to dream your dream
more bravely,
has undone you!.

No compassion now,
just pity for a shell
empty… spiritual
suicide and fear!.
Flawed gift!.


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Sunday morning dark here!? Whoa! Compassion does need to be earned!. Www@QuestionHome@Com

Angry, livid and fuming mad,
All of these emotions!.
Good thing, I feel at times,
There is not such a potion!.

Lack of understanding,No,
Dreams Yes, I've had Broken!.
Compassion for another,
I hold with such devotion!.

Empty,Is how I feel
That there's no denying,
and for this I am at Fault,
It Is I that feels like dieing!.

wow!. excellent poem!.
really entails the emotions one experiences when an anger burst is triggered!. i simply adore the lines: "-to dream your dream more bravely,"!. really, those lines did it for me!. they were so power and full of dense meaning!.
poetry embodies the power of words!.!.!.and that is exactly what your poem did!

thank you:]

Well worded poem!. interesting,
But am wondering,
"It is human to error!."
So would it not be,
"Lack of Spiritual feeling!."

Unless I am missing your message,
that would be my thought!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

You drink from a much shared bottle, Dear!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

You said it well!
Let's hope for peace, today and always!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I feel only disappointment!.!.!.nothing more need be said!.Www@QuestionHome@Com