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Position:Home>Poetry> What do you think of my poetry?? ?Question: What do you think of my poetry!?!? !? New beginning I can see a lot of doors But I can't find the one That will make my heart shine One more time All I can see is black and white And emptiness is all around But still I know I'm going to find the light One more time The sadness of my heart Won't die until I find the light One more time I still have my hope I still have my faith And I guess it's enough for me I have to believe That I have no luck No one In this huge world Time is passing And I have to start a new beginning Cause yesterday was over And tomorrow may never come So I have to live my life today I'm not going to wait I'm not going to waste another moment This will be my new beginning Finally I found the light That will shine my heart One more time so!.!.!.what do you think!?!?Www@QuestionHome@Com Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: Wow!. That is AMAZING!. You should definitely put some music to that (I recommend musicshake) and you could become the next Sara Bareillies!. :)Www@QuestionHome@Com I agree, they sound like song lyrics!. Beautiful, good jobWww@QuestionHome@Com its great sara barielles sucks, so you'll be even better!. get that copyrighted b4 some1 on Y!A takes it!Www@QuestionHome@Com Wow!.!.!.that made my eyes water!. Very mysterious!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Its not funny, try this I can see a lot of doors But I can't find the one The one to make my poor heart shine I guess I drank far tooo much wiine All I can see is black and white the orange glow of the street light And emptiness is all around then the right door at last I found!. I crawl unsteady up the stairs In bed I find I your sleeping there, I climb beside you we make love Angel choirs sing from above!. With morning comes an awful shock Strange sounds from the alarm clock And different curtains, diffent lights Its the wrong house I realise!. You lie grinning like a cheshire Cat my god I slept with some old bat And fleeing from the house I own In future I'll stick to Newcastle BrownWww@QuestionHome@Com |