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Question: Do you guys like my poem!?!?
On the hard stone floor Orfwald lay
Above him the beast he was trying to slay
the beast gave a shrieking cry
all who hear it are doomed to die
but Orfwald's soul did not give
he struggled and struggled to try to live
the beast thought it had won
it did what had to be done
but it didnt know that orfwald would not die today
even though it will try as it may
with a strangled cry orfwald stood
his sword in his right hand as it should
he swung it towards the beasts neck
it his and sunk in with a loud 'theck'
Orfwald stood victorious over the beast
glad he had not been turned into a feast

do u guys liike it!?!?!?


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
its good! but wtf is an orfwald!?Www@QuestionHome@Com

yeh its good but what sirt of name is Orfwald!?!?!?Www@QuestionHome@Com