{[DOH]} }{ANER's initiation into the poetic world of Yahoo answers ?

Question: {[DOH]} }{ANER's initiation into the poetic world of Yahoo answers !?

Whether it be blood or guts,
or fights of glory,
every man has his own story!

The breaking mind
makes a hellish tale,
on which the boat of legend sail!.

Preparation of a loyal heart,
can a soldier be created!.
Domination of a servants love,
will freedom so be weighted!.
-HAHNERWww@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

This poem has a wonderfully staccato rhythm, and fairly gallops from beginning to end!.!.!.perhaps to honor country!?!? This is a lovely, compact poem that reminds the reader of the price of freedom, a freedom we have come to take for granted!. A fine initiation HAHNER!.Www@QuestionHome@Com