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Question: Edited my poem!. What do you think!?
Today I checked back in,
To hotel reality,
I realized some things,
That had escaped me,

I remember now,
My Heavenly Father cares,
And wants me to be happy,
He listens to my prayers,

And the boy I love,
Would do anything for me,
It makes me cry with joy,
To look into his eyes and see,

I can spill my heart,
Release my looming fears,
Remove the heavy doubt,
Cast off the weight of the years,

I should have never thought,
Even for a few seconds,
I could possibly be alone,
When love just beckons!.

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Change the 4th line in the 4th verse to:

Cast off the weight of years!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

"Hotel reality," I like that!. And your rhyme scheme works well too!. Nice work!. Have you chosen a title!?Www@QuestionHome@Com

Great poem, I really like it!.