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Question: My poem Hellbound what do you think!?
Last night i woke from a dream ' shaking and shivering as it was quite obscene!.
I dreamt that I had wasted my life' just barely living
thinking it was alright!.
I seen mothers with babies all running around as i stood with my longest face and a big *** frown!.
I sat and thought for a really long time' why i never married and hear some laughter around!.
I sat and pondered and searched within'why i never smiled and been happy within!.
The angels stared for awhile and said honey' it's because your a child and very dead!.I ran and jumped all around' it all came to me that this is hell and the fire and brimstone' was like nothing i had seen around!.
I looked up and prayed ' and whispered why' never is it me'
just because i was molested at three!.
Now i see my life as it passed me by ' as in hell no friends and no outside!.
I wander all day in the hot pits of hell' as daily i puke from this hot burning flesh!.
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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
very wild and wicked Cami! Www@QuestionHome@Com

You gotta try to let that past go!. Live for today!. The past can`t hurt you unless you let it!. You sound like a beautiful and smart woman!. Look ahead!. Stay with us in the present!. We need you Cami!. And we all care about you!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Whoa this is a creepy but great poem and i liked it so much!.I go for darker type poems and this is right up my isle!.Www@QuestionHome@Com