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It just rained, so I wrote a poem, What do you think!?!?
The blur of rain falls so violently
Yet awakes no one sleeping silently
The sun hides out of fear
To wait until the sky’s are clear
Darkness shades over the day
Turns the storming sky to grey
The sun is still no where in sight
The darkened sky then turns to night
The sky now angry begins to yell
Releasing forth his magic spell
Bolts of fire leave the sky
Unleash another horrid cry
The trees now dancing in the wind
Flow so hard to when their skinned
The sun learned to concur his fright
Decides to shed a little light!.
Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
This poem is awesomely written
I like how you described each line
the first line for example talks about a
down pour of rain!.
Those stormy clouds can and are an
indicator!. Along with the thunder and lightning
The thunder and lightning can be frightening
The lightning can be bolts
during the rain weather
the winds can be damaging!.
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You're good with words!.
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