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Position:Home>Poetry> Would you please comment on my poem?Question: Would you please comment on my poem!? THE NOTHING TO SAY CLUB In accordance with blood!. Www@QuestionHome@Com Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: I concur!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Sorry, "I have NOTHING TO SAY BUK" The Accordance of Retribution: Part 1A satire on violence with a humerous and dark take on revenge Category: Film & Animation http://www!.youtube!.com/watch!?v=KGrwjsJqv!.!.!. Hope this Makes You Think! Love!.Jo!.xxxxWww@QuestionHome@Com You forgot about truth! Its ( with blood and truth); even when truth is twisted by nothing, it shall be revealed ! The sun rises every day, even on the North pole!.It's just not seen by the people there (for some time)!. Www@QuestionHome@Com I knew it!! I just knew that some sunny day you would come up with a poem! And, what a deep, exceptional poem it is! I am so emotional, I cannot say anything more than ' Thank you! ' Bravo ! * applauds * Www@QuestionHome@Com Well, I was going to go out tonight, drink obscene amounts of gin and hit on bunches of young, sweaty people but after reading your poem, I realize it's pointless!. Www@QuestionHome@Com Not very poetic but it's kind of intriguing!. lol What do you think of mine!? http://answers!.yahoo!.com/question/index;!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com There you go, running your mouth again, always speaking your mind, throwing your two cents in, getting a word in edge wise!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Unspoken and unsaid resounds Within each breath, heart and mind, heard !.!. Indeed Homer might be turning in his grave If we hadn’t cremated him … Www@QuestionHome@Com Sorry Buk, It's too long to read, it's time for my medication, and frankly, I can't be botheredWww@QuestionHome@Com Buk, I think this is the literary equivalent to dancing with the stars!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Got it!. Well, it's an easy read!. Probably easy to remember, too!.Www@QuestionHome@Com I have less than nothing to say!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Blood makes me woozy!.Www@QuestionHome@Com coolio!. yer poem is anorexic!.!.!. and i like it!. hahaha! Www@QuestionHome@Com Blue or red blood!.Www@QuestionHome@Com blind obedience Www@QuestionHome@Com Blood and Truth!. Pure Bukowski!. Morning, maWww@QuestionHome@Com You & your poems amaze me! Job well done! This must have been your hardest one to write!Www@QuestionHome@Com I laughed, I cried, I coughed up a little phlegm, then took a nap!. Bravo!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Precise and to the point!. Very interesting!. LOLWww@QuestionHome@Com zero (0)Www@QuestionHome@Com I've nothing to say!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Whiskey thins your blood!.!.lolWww@QuestionHome@Com First they take my points, now you want my blood!Www@QuestionHome@Com You always have something to say!. Most of the time it is coherent!.Www@QuestionHome@Com YesWww@QuestionHome@Com Homer is turning over in his grave!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Bite your tongue ! Www@QuestionHome@Com once again you amaze Www@QuestionHome@Com it was a little longWww@QuestionHome@Com sometimes the most is said with the fewest wordsWww@QuestionHome@Com |