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Question: Would you please comment on my poem!?

THE NOTHING TO SAY CLUB

In accordance
with blood!.
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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
I concur!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Sorry, "I have NOTHING TO SAY BUK"

The Accordance of Retribution: Part 1A satire on violence with a humerous and dark take on revenge
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Hope this Makes You Think!

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You forgot about truth! Its ( with blood and truth); even when truth is twisted by nothing, it shall be revealed ! The sun rises every day, even on the North pole!.It's just not seen by the people there (for some time)!. Www@QuestionHome@Com

I knew it!!
I just knew that some sunny day you would come up with a poem!
And, what a deep, exceptional poem it is!
I am so emotional, I cannot say anything more than ' Thank you! '

Bravo !

* applauds *
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Well, I was going to go out tonight, drink obscene amounts of gin and hit on bunches of young, sweaty people but after reading your poem, I realize it's pointless!. Www@QuestionHome@Com

Not very poetic but it's kind of intriguing!. lol

What do you think of mine!?
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There you go, running your mouth again, always speaking your mind, throwing your two cents in, getting a word in edge wise!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Unspoken and unsaid resounds
Within each breath, heart and mind, heard !.!.

Indeed Homer might be turning in his grave
If we hadn’t cremated him …
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Sorry Buk, It's too long to read, it's time for my medication, and frankly, I can't be botheredWww@QuestionHome@Com

Buk, I think this is the literary equivalent to dancing with the stars!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Got it!. Well, it's an easy read!. Probably easy to remember, too!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I have less than nothing to say!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Blood makes me woozy!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

coolio!. yer poem is anorexic!.!.!. and i like it!.
hahaha! Www@QuestionHome@Com

Blue or red blood!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

blind obedience
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Blood and Truth!.

Pure Bukowski!.

Morning,
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You & your poems amaze me! Job well done! This must have been your hardest one to write!Www@QuestionHome@Com

I laughed, I cried, I coughed up a little phlegm, then took a nap!. Bravo!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Precise and to the point!. Very interesting!. LOLWww@QuestionHome@Com

zero (0)Www@QuestionHome@Com

I've nothing to say!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Whiskey thins your blood!.!.lolWww@QuestionHome@Com

First they take my points, now you want my blood!Www@QuestionHome@Com

You always have something to say!. Most of the time it is coherent!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

YesWww@QuestionHome@Com

Homer is turning over in his grave!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Bite your tongue ! Www@QuestionHome@Com

once again you amaze
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it was a little longWww@QuestionHome@Com

sometimes the most is said with the fewest wordsWww@QuestionHome@Com