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In accordance
with blood!.

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
I concur!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Sorry, "I have NOTHING TO SAY BUK"

The Accordance of Retribution: Part 1A satire on violence with a humerous and dark take on revenge
Category: Film & Animation


Hope this Makes You Think!


You forgot about truth! Its ( with blood and truth); even when truth is twisted by nothing, it shall be revealed ! The sun rises every day, even on the North pole!.It's just not seen by the people there (for some time)!. Www@QuestionHome@Com

I knew it!!
I just knew that some sunny day you would come up with a poem!
And, what a deep, exceptional poem it is!
I am so emotional, I cannot say anything more than ' Thank you! '

Bravo !

* applauds *

Well, I was going to go out tonight, drink obscene amounts of gin and hit on bunches of young, sweaty people but after reading your poem, I realize it's pointless!. Www@QuestionHome@Com

Not very poetic but it's kind of intriguing!. lol

What do you think of mine!?

There you go, running your mouth again, always speaking your mind, throwing your two cents in, getting a word in edge wise!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Unspoken and unsaid resounds
Within each breath, heart and mind, heard !.!.

Indeed Homer might be turning in his grave
If we hadn’t cremated him …

Sorry Buk, It's too long to read, it's time for my medication, and frankly, I can't be botheredWww@QuestionHome@Com

Buk, I think this is the literary equivalent to dancing with the stars!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Got it!. Well, it's an easy read!. Probably easy to remember, too!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I have less than nothing to say!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Blood makes me woozy!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

coolio!. yer poem is anorexic!.!.!. and i like it!.
hahaha! Www@QuestionHome@Com

Blue or red blood!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

blind obedience

Blood and Truth!.

Pure Bukowski!.


You & your poems amaze me! Job well done! This must have been your hardest one to write!Www@QuestionHome@Com

I laughed, I cried, I coughed up a little phlegm, then took a nap!. Bravo!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Precise and to the point!. Very interesting!. LOLWww@QuestionHome@Com

zero (0)Www@QuestionHome@Com

I've nothing to say!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Whiskey thins your blood!.!.lolWww@QuestionHome@Com

First they take my points, now you want my blood!Www@QuestionHome@Com

You always have something to say!. Most of the time it is coherent!.Www@QuestionHome@Com


Homer is turning over in his grave!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Bite your tongue ! Www@QuestionHome@Com

once again you amaze

it was a little longWww@QuestionHome@Com

sometimes the most is said with the fewest wordsWww@QuestionHome@Com