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Question: Poem!? Tell me what you think!.!.!?
So here's a poem I wrote!. I really just threw it together!. I was trying to go to sleep then I just came up with this poem!. Odd, huh!? I know!.
So here it is oh, and it's called I'm Me!.
-Clears Throat- (Loll)

They stop, They stare
I'm different, who cares!?
They mock me, They tease me
I say they all just want to be me
They ask me to change like them, and that's something I cant do!.
I can't live a lie that's so so untrue!.
I can't be like them but their steadily asking me, "When, When and When!?"
I've made up my mind, I can't be like them!.
I can't be someone else, until I'm put to rest!.
I'm me, I say!. Take it or leave it, like it or not, I'm still going to be me and not you on the clock!. My name is Alexis, I don't live in Texas, and I don't drive a Lexus!.
I'm me like I said, take it or leave it, like it or not, I'm STILL NOT going to be you around the clock!.

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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
tells you something about our society and how so many people need to change to "fit in"!. i made a change in 8th grade and startin hangin with my real friends instead of who i wanted to be!.!.!.!.now im myself

sweet poem thoughWww@QuestionHome@Com

haha thats almost like a rap song than a poem!. If you came up with that before going to sleep, you most thing about your haters alot when going to bed!. but thats cool!.!.!. i rap myself and i wouldnt say its the ish but its decent!.!.!. Www@QuestionHome@Com

Quite a strong message you have written young lady!. It's layout is not the thing here but what you have said!. It is a forcible message that you have penned!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

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OMG!! that would be such a good song!! ahh i wish i could come up with that i write songs and have my own little recording studio!.!. =] Www@QuestionHome@Com

Certainly its obvious you like to be "different" just for the sake of being different -- as is evident by your name ! Ugh ! who wants a monochromatic rainbow !? Www@QuestionHome@Com

Whoever 'they' are , they certainly musta got the message , seeing how you repeat it about 'n' times !Www@QuestionHome@Com

Really good!!! i love the meaning and everything!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Very Creative! Keep that pencil handy!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

sounds amature but you the flow is good!. keep at it you may be the next maya angeloWww@QuestionHome@Com

It was really good until the my name is alexis!.!.!.!.and so on that just sounds like an elementary thingWww@QuestionHome@Com

Wow really good poem!Www@QuestionHome@Com

pretty damn good! :)Www@QuestionHome@Com

its cool if you live that way!. i gotta say i liked itWww@QuestionHome@Com