Question: Does the storm come before the calm!?
Storm surges sweet
Against waves of
Sadness that drown
Souls in lost motions
Breathing last breaths
Diurnal pools of change
Ebb and flow through me
Lifting one settling another
Currents tugging together
Directing me to sea
Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
But which sea carries you to the shores of home, which storm tosses you into a calm that can be even more frenetic than the one you left!. How can you leave time and chance to intervene mercilessly!? All this, do I ponder, rocked gently on the waves of your poem!. Thank you!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
I liked the poem Hmm!.!.!. diurnal (an everyday occurrence), sounds cool and mysterious!.
personal note: new number one for my wish list!. I need a diurnal jacuzzi with semi-wild semi-naked women who are also available for house cleaning and kitchen duty!.
oh yea, the calm interrupts the storm!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
I m not so sure!.!.
!.!. there is a deafening calm before each and all of my storms!.!.
an almost tepid feeling in the air morbidly and succinctly encompassing me!.!.
To see!.!.!. the Sea!?
!.!.how far in the sea!?
will you reserve
a spot for me!?
LOVED IT!.especially diurnal pools of change ebb and flow through me!.I've weathered this storm!.Carried an umbrella for a long long time!.
But then sunshine!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Lovely poem, melancholy message, yet somehow tranquil!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Now this I love!
To answer your question, it goes both ways!.Www@QuestionHome@Com