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Question: What do you think of my poem called "True Love"!?
True Love

The pain
Is never ending
Like water flowing
Throughout the world

It kills you slowly
Little by little
Day by day

Until that one comes to save you
And you save them, too
From that movement on you know
They are the one for you

Your soul mate, best friend
The apple of my eye
The love of your life

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
i like it, when two people come together and they help each other then it grows from friendship into a very strong love, into falling in love and soul mates for life, because what you shared together cannot be replaced and was given out of pure love, and that's the best!!
Friends, lovers & soul mates, for forever & a day, there isn't anything you would not do for this love!?Www@QuestionHome@Com

I think it's quite awesome and great as you did a good job with the subject as it falls from your heart!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Try making it all rhyme!. Put a little more time into it, but I like most of it!.Www@QuestionHome@Com