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Position:Home>Poetry> You hurt me I can't breath?Question: You hurt me I can't breath!? You Hurt Me To The Point You hurt me just until the point where it stayed The pain will never go away And there in the dark recesses of my heart Are the torn peices where you announced your part Look me in the eyes Does it look like I want to cry!? I do And its over you The bad memmories simply remain And they replay themselves over and over again Im be, ing disentegrated inside And there you stand overwhelmed with pride While I lay here, life pouring out of me, exposing my newly pale face Lillies and white lace Adorn my spirit scorned You hurt me to the point where the agony rooted itself deep into me And like a weed destroyed my living being Your wrecking my mind with a giant steel ball Its peircing my insanity, and demolishing it all you have my neck in your vile thrall And you've unintentionally rewired my brain So when they whisper your name I go compltely insane Ill never be the same Instead Ill be the girl that let you in The girl who no matter how hard she tries, will never win You are her greatest sin & her longest regret Hardest to forgive, hardest to forget You hurt her to the point where the dejection enthralled every bit of her laughter And this poor girl could never smile after So Ill devise a plan; to ease my soul Slit my wrists, and easy goal Watch me now as the remnants spill out You took the rest so only tainted nothings were left without a doubt & watch me now as the choir sings Pipe organs, chimes, loud and clamoring Watch me now as the people weep Then onto their faces solemn sorrow creeps & watch me now, as the bells ring so loud Tears and gasps among the crowd Their lowering me into the ground Are you watching now!? And even though now Im dead Cut wrists and bullet in head Rememeber you caused this And the pain will NEVER go away Www@QuestionHome@Com Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: if your heart is broken, then through that poem so is mine!. it's beautiful!. i don't know what to say except it's beautiful and that if u really r heartbroken then u have my deepest sympathies!. it's one of those poems that the authors emotion just creeps into your soul!. it is truly beautiful and i'm sure everyone will say that!. i just absolutely love it because it's so!.!. beautiful and then i hate it because it's so sad but that makes me love it even more!. u've really captured the the audience there girl!. Www@QuestionHome@Com wow!.!.!. simply amazing!. the words articulately joined together in a somewhat seemless chain of poetry and deep emotion!. thankyou for sharingWww@QuestionHome@Com Absolutely Beautiful!. If someone has hurt you, I'm so sorry!. You have all my sympathies!. Www@QuestionHome@Com yes the pain never goes away, it's very well written and will find an echo in many hearts which have been touched by pain!. Www@QuestionHome@Com that was so amazingly beautiful!. i know of all those feelings of heartbreak!. :(Www@QuestionHome@Com This was amazing Keep up the good workWww@QuestionHome@Com my heart goes out to youWww@QuestionHome@Com |