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Tell me about this peom, you know what you think about it>!?
i'll try and make it like a song
becuase internet users want it to belong
if you need another word
i am glad this was heard
i know it was really read
but a missed ryme i dread
so just let me finish
this dont work like a wish
so a little short i know i lied
but a least i know i really tried!Www@QuestionHome@Com
Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
I like it but it seems like it missing feeling!. Try to paint a picture in people's minds with your poems!. SO people can see what is happening or how you feel!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
I think this is pointless and bad!. But I think that is your point, at least I hope it is!. The rhymes are forced, and it really doesn't go anywhere!.
So well done on writing a pointless poem!. Www@QuestionHome@Com
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