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Is it okay to post drunk here!?
Care to watch a little TV with a drunk!?
Almost at the point of convergence
Mental pixels coalesce
Into the dawning of a dead day!.
Was there any other way!?
Maybe once, but twice forgotten
As fervent dreams had turned to rotten
Now faded like the waning hours
The tempest crests as life devours
Here scalded scolded remnants loom
Evicted guest without a room
Within his house of golden gone--
A shadow left to mourn the dawn!.
So!.!.!.!.what's on your TV!?Www@QuestionHome@Com
Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Drunk is the least of the conditions of those who post (you know who you are!) - this is an awesome piece - you are a poet - this probably took you a few minutes to complete - your command of rhetorical device and figurative language is apparent - thanx! -Www@QuestionHome@Com
Drunk huh, sounds like fun!.!.!. What's on my TV!? lol, the computer is my TV, so you are!
ss?? ? kiss Www@QuestionHome@Com
I'm not watching TV!. I'm sorting through all of the perverted pictures in my head!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
[I DIGG IT!]Www@QuestionHome@Com