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Question: Is this the place where I post my poetry for people to review and critique!?
HE PLAYS
A SONG FOR YOU

Off we go
to somewhere under,
bumbling for
bilk and blunder,
and our plans
soon gone asunder,
damned by God,
damn his thunder!.
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I love it!.!.!.!.especially for the sounds!.!.!.!.thunder, under, blunder, asunder!.!.!.my ears celebrate the reading of this poem!!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Beautiful rhyme and assonance!. Thank you, but know that thunder can also be a gentle rumble, not necessarily a sky shattering crack!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

TD would never lie to you!. If he says he did a lot of work, I guess it's true!.

Now, for the poem!.!.!.my oh my, even the cops write poetry on here!. And it's not bad either!. Www@QuestionHome@Com

Not bad, for an old dude!.!.!.no, wait!.!.!.I'm the old dude!.!.!.you're fresh, and exciting!.!.!.

Elaine can back me up on this!. I did a lot of work today!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Priceless!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

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