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A SONG FOR YOU
Off we go
to somewhere under,
bumbling for
bilk and blunder,
and our plans
soon gone asunder,
damned by God,
damn his thunder!.
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A SONG FOR YOU Off we go to somewhere under, bumbling for bilk and blunder, and our plans soon gone asunder, damned by God, damn his thunder!. Www@QuestionHome@Com Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: I love it!.!.!.!.especially for the sounds!.!.!.!.thunder, under, blunder, asunder!.!.!.my ears celebrate the reading of this poem!!Www@QuestionHome@Com Beautiful rhyme and assonance!. Thank you, but know that thunder can also be a gentle rumble, not necessarily a sky shattering crack!.Www@QuestionHome@Com TD would never lie to you!. If he says he did a lot of work, I guess it's true!. Now, for the poem!.!.!.my oh my, even the cops write poetry on here!. And it's not bad either!. Www@QuestionHome@Com Not bad, for an old dude!.!.!.no, wait!.!.!.I'm the old dude!.!.!.you're fresh, and exciting!.!.!. Elaine can back me up on this!. I did a lot of work today!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Priceless!.Www@QuestionHome@Com epicWww@QuestionHome@Com |