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Question: Would like comments please on my poem thanks!?
How you doing today!?
hope your feeling fine,
would love to hear
what you dream of,
would love to tell you mine!.

I don't know,
but I guess we're
much the same,
feeding on the
good times,
laughing off the pain!.

Putting on performance
as we close the sanctuary door,
shielding true emotions
for the bread of daily chore!.

But how you doing today!?
I hope your feeling fine,
I'm sending love,
please send it back,
life's a moment
and not all time!.


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
wow your talented U SHOULD BE A POET GOOD LUCK!!!!!!!!!!Www@QuestionHome@Com

The poem is great only you do have some grammar mistakes!. Don't know if it matter** But ya good job!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I like it, I think its very deep!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

well done you should be proud of yourself!!!Www@QuestionHome@Com

i like what you wrote
keep on:)Www@QuestionHome@Com