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Question: Do you have time for 3 short terse lines!?
Truth is our fountain
water cleansing souls and minds
'til we become one!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

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Yes I like it, and I think truth does have the power to cleanse!. I think you also need governments to tell the truth for there to be genuine democracy and I think there should be penalties (jail) for members of government who don't!. The media as well really!.

I prefer one to free, though I would be inclined to go for - ' til we see clearly!. Total unity of thought in a people would worry me!.

When I first read it I thought you mean't that soul and mind would become one, and I liked that interpretation aswell!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

The truth shall make you free - but I do not know about ONE!. That might only be achieved when all can take - the truth - without reservations and self ego preservation!. The truth - by itself - may not have the healing power - be able to cleanse!. ?Www@QuestionHome@Com

cool water of truth
soothes the dryness of seekers
wan'dring the desertWww@QuestionHome@Com

The fountain broken,
water water everywhere
dive in, water's fine!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Well truth is not everything and certainly wont make us one!. !. !.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Astro-terse, like in the Marsdome!?Www@QuestionHome@Com

This sounds like haiku, is this what you were going for!? I do like the message! Cheers!Www@QuestionHome@Com

What a great epitaph!Www@QuestionHome@Com

If true then prepare
Waters of force are coming
We shall be cleansed

How's that BMG!?Www@QuestionHome@Com