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Sunshine

Flows on fields these grounds adorn,
And red spells of sunshine by morn,
The fire through life and below to warm,
Soon sets the sunshine,
The sunshine at dawn!. Www@QuestionHome@Com


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I read your poem, checked your profile, visited the 2 linked sites - how dare you say in your personal info "Hmmm im 16 y/o guy BUT i sometimes like to write poems"!? You should immediately change that to "Hmmm I'm a 16 y/o guy and I sometimes love to write poems, yepp!" You write some beautiful poetry and I would love to read more of that in the future! I happen to be an artist who is into doing Linoleum cuts, Woodcuts and experimental collagraphs, I also work as a volunteer at the Gutenberg Museum in Mainz, Germany!. We try to keep old traditions alive by using antique letter presses and movable lead types, and I for one am always on the lookout for poetry which is worth printing, and which could also be emphasized by an interesting design!. I hope you don't mind, but I copied your poem and will try to get it printed soon!. When the print is done, I will try to send it to you! Just so you know that I am not a fake - I am the leader of the board for YC Germany and this is the HP of the Druckladen (printing shop) of the Gutenberg Museum where I work (we are a nonprofit place!): http://www!.zeitenwende!.com/gutenberg/ !. On the front page you may click on "Der Film ├╝ber uns", a short video will play which was taken for a German TV station last year, displaying me working with a couple of children - I'm the lady giving an interview sitting on a chair!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

This is cute
I like the title sunshine
and how the sun is warm
This is nature's light

Sunshine:
The sun is a light to nature
it helps things to grow
like the plants!.
The sunshine at dawn is the sunrise
while when it sets that would be the sunset!.
The sunrise sunset are both beautiful!.
If you intend on getting a picture
do it quickly because its like the rainbow
the beautiful coloring effect doesn't last!. Www@QuestionHome@Com

nice and simple yet very pretty at the same time I really like it :] Www@QuestionHome@Com