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Position:Home>Poetry> Can words remove, as well as move, people?Question: Can words remove, as well as move, people!? Stage Right Slither in Stomp out Subtle, comes the storm Disturbing the pieces Desirous of notice only Wrecking to be reckoned Amongst the fog bound Someone, please!? See me Touch me Hear me Make me matter Oh, you are matter Tainted and opaque Staining the pages Brown water words Yet angels sing Cherubs rise above Choirs rejoice As right shows might Stage cleared Cleansed Purified by honesty They know they are We know you aren't rad082808 Www@QuestionHome@Com Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: perfect!. Www@QuestionHome@Com Very covert and creative!.!.!.at least I think so!. I might know who or what you are writing about, but since I can't be 100% certain, I'll just keep it to myself!. However, despite the uncertainty, this can be applied to just about anyone vying for negative attention!.!.!.at least I think so!. An enjoyable read!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Well said!. I am chuckling!. We do seem to know the culprit!. Edit: Oh, very vague were you! Why don't you change the title to Gustav Coming! lolWww@QuestionHome@Com words unspoken move no one!. but the spoken incite!.!. as the written ignite!.!. and delight!.!. !.!.!.are preserved!.!.!. if deserved!. !. ciao! Www@QuestionHome@Com Interesting poetic metaphor, excellently done!. Www@QuestionHome@Com I forgot, the answer from the other day was, "Yes, 1 year and 1 day, all of 1980!."Www@QuestionHome@Com Inspiring!Www@QuestionHome@Com I almost missed this! Interesting metaphors and very well written!. Www@QuestionHome@Com If only it were that simple!. Love the poem!Www@QuestionHome@Com I think I know what you're trying to get at with this, but I'd have to say: probably not!.Www@QuestionHome@Com |