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Question: Can words remove, as well as move, people!?

Stage Right

Slither in
Stomp out
Subtle, comes the storm

Disturbing the pieces
Desirous of notice only
Wrecking to be reckoned
Amongst the fog bound

Someone, please!?
See me
Touch me
Hear me
Make me matter

Oh, you are matter
Tainted and opaque
Staining the pages
Brown water words

Yet angels sing
Cherubs rise above
Choirs rejoice
As right shows might

Stage cleared
Cleansed
Purified by honesty
They know they are
We know you aren't

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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
perfect!.

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Very covert and creative!.!.!.at least I think so!. I might know who or what you are writing about, but since I can't be 100% certain, I'll just keep it to myself!. However, despite the uncertainty, this can be applied to just about anyone vying for negative attention!.!.!.at least I think so!. An enjoyable read!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Well said!. I am chuckling!. We do seem to know the culprit!.

Edit: Oh, very vague were you! Why don't you change the title to Gustav Coming! lolWww@QuestionHome@Com

words unspoken move no one!.
but the spoken incite!.!. as the written ignite!.!. and delight!.!.
!.!.!.are preserved!.!.!. if deserved!.

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ciao!
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Interesting poetic metaphor, excellently done!. Www@QuestionHome@Com

I forgot, the answer from the other day was, "Yes, 1 year and 1 day, all of 1980!."Www@QuestionHome@Com

Inspiring!Www@QuestionHome@Com

I almost missed this! Interesting metaphors and very well written!.
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If only it were that simple!.
Love the poem!Www@QuestionHome@Com

I think I know what you're trying to get at with this, but I'd have to say: probably not!.Www@QuestionHome@Com