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Question: Anyone wanna give me there opinion on my poem!?
Okay i'm not 100% sure if i like my poem, but can you let me know what you think of it!. Thanks, its called "I Quit"

I've waited for years!.
Working hard!.
Giving it my all!.
What do I have to show!?
Always someone younger!.
More outgoing!.
Gets along with everyone!.
How can I compete!?
I've done everything the same!.
Been just as nice!.
Not a person can deny!.
Why is it so unfair!?
I don't understand the reasons!.
The explanations are lies!.
I'm sick of waiting!.
I'm done!.
You'll regret it when I'm gone!.
Don't call me!.
Don't even ask!.
It was your mistake!.
Its your loss!.
I don't care anymore!.
Effort was wasted!.
Why did I even try!?
I'm better off elsewhere!.
I'll be more appreciated!.
Happier than before!.
With less bull ****!.
I wanted it!.
But now, screw it!.
I'm tired of it!.
Find someone else!.
I'm done!.
It's over!.
I'm leaving!.
I quit

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Nice poem!. It is something that I can personally relate to!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Its good but also kinda long but overall its really goodWww@QuestionHome@Com

Its amazing!Www@QuestionHome@Com

luv it!Www@QuestionHome@Com