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For some when their time comes,
their petals fall up to the heavens
and join the stars!.

To say from within, without
shine on, for you are never alone!.

From the clouds
rain ripples the waters
that nourishes the beauty
we cherish!.

Gone from sight but not from mind
My fathers face so loving and kind!.

Envisioned rugged and strong, actions full of grace
I know I will see him everywhere and everyplace!.

Red carnations, yellow daisies, long trips, white satin erase
all cause me to smile fondly and remember my fathers face!.

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Oh, yes!.!. it goes sort of like this!.!.!.

As the petals fall upwards they are swept down by the waterfall
Their scent is wafting delicately yet intense
and it fills my brain with memories
of my mother
And how it felt to let her go
As I lay beneath it floating and surreal!.

Roses, Yellow buttercups, Lily of the Valley
comfort me with their scents filling my world!.!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Yes, I've had moments similar to yours!. I was most intrigued by the petals falling upward!. Since that is spiritual, few would have the nerve to see or write against the natural!. Thanks for being one in a million!. 'Millionairess' for many reasons and some similar to this, was my name until recently changed to Millie!. (Trying to get comfortable with the new name!.)Www@QuestionHome@Com

Yes, and I was fortunate enough to be there when the petals fell from my father!. My hope and prayer is that I get to see him again some day when he is in full bloom and without the thorns of this life!. Thank you for this poem!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

And I trust he smiles fondly when he looks upon the face
of the young boy left behind so long ago
who has become his honorable legacy!.


Yes, but not as gorgeous as this, my friend!. Thank you for sharing it with us!.


Awwww, that's nice!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Wow, Ron!.!.!.a human side of this animal lover!. Very nice!.

Sandy :O)Www@QuestionHome@Com

I LOVE IT!.Www@QuestionHome@Com