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Question: What do you think of my poem about super heroes!?
Super Something

The Super Hero inside of me
A savior lost to immorality!.
Another sin of relativity
A silent tale of chivalry
Confused soul of a vigilante!.

Bad Guys bite the dust
And to dust we shall return
Some will fly and others burn!.
And where will God put me,
Confused soul of a vigilante!?

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Pretty good though I have to say that the two 'fifth lines' make it sound a bit awkward to me!. I know diddly about poetry itself and how this type and that type work!. I only know how they sound to me!. Your content I like but as I said!.!.!.!.!.it's not quite there imho!.

ps!. still heaps better than I can do!Www@QuestionHome@Com

good!. i like it!. but it is slightly juvenille!. i do like it though!.Www@QuestionHome@Com