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Question: Is this haiku a welcomed relief!?
from one who tends to use too many words!?

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It is a lovely statement!. If it isn't about nature, in Japanese it is called a Senryu!. If it is in English, we call it an Ameri-ku (creative new terminology), because we can't really render this form into English!.You have nonetheless written something beautiful and wise!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

"Squish squash, sling that slang!
I'm always right back at ya;
Like!.!.!. my BOOMERANG!!"

"That's right, I'm Sokka!
It's pronounced with an 'okka'!
Young ladies!.!.!. I rocked ya!"

Bouncer-looking guy: That's too many syllables, bub!. *Throws him out*

- Sorry, I just HAD to quote that hilarious "haiku" from Avatar!. =)

Anyway, when haikus come from me they're never a relief; for I write at least 10 of them in Haiku form to create one poem!. =)Www@QuestionHome@Com

Oh ma, you've done it again now haven't you!. We touch so many hearts here!. I know I've never felt so alive as I do when I get to visit my friends!. You all can never really replace my real family, but you're my extended family and I luvs ya all!. I have comfort when I hurt, friendship when I need it, advice when I don't know what to do!. You may not know it, but you are my friends!. I don't bother with anyone around me!. All stupid hillbillies!. That's a whole other subject!. LOLWww@QuestionHome@Com

You have used exactly the right number of words, and more importantly the right words!. Wonderful!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I like it! My 9 year old niece once wrote this one that sticks with me!.

Summertime is here!.
The weather is getting hot!.
My cat licks her fur!.


Very nice with true written all over it!. Well done!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I knew I would learn something today!Www@QuestionHome@Com