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Question: Do you like my poem or is it dumb!?
Had a date at Club Fusion
Left my car running and it got confusing
Took some meds and had a smoke
Then it was days before I awoke!.
Why is everybody so mean and bad
I just like to have fun and never get sad!.Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Non-dumb!. Halfway to a really good poem!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

its is dumb, you just made a silly rhyme for a silly poem book, for adults!. nothing special, just some lady caught up in her silly little world!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

that's just horrible!. i mean really bad!. it sucked!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I dont know if it is a good idea to make light of the little girl who is missing because of that woman!. Taste level a bit questionableWww@QuestionHome@Com

not to bad, could use some work!.Www@QuestionHome@Com