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Thoughts on this poem for my boyfriend!?!?
I wrote this poem for my boyfriend and would love to hear your thoughts on it!. : )
When you flash that innocent grin
my world stops spinning
and I feel like a kid again
My heart is racing,
my stomach's fluttering
When you look away
you keep me wondering
So I think of you all day
I wonder if you feel the same way
Do your eyes light up when you see my face!?
Does your stomach flutter, does your heart race!?
Does a simple smile take your breath away!?
Do I leave you wondering all day!?
When you hear my voice, do you turn around
to see the joy that you have found!?
When you look into my eyes,
do you find where hope lies!?
When you hold my hand,
does it take you to a land
where joy is overflowing
and you end up knowing
there's no place you'd rather be
than right here next to me!?Www@QuestionHome@Com
Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Aw, that is so cute
he will love this poem!.
I like the parts eyes lighting up
I think of you all day!.
He is probably doing the same for you too
He must be someone special
because without him
you would be lost
That's really, really good!. I loved that I could picture myself in your position, seeing him through your eyes, feeling my pulse race when he came near!.
Whoever he is, he is really lucky to have you!.
One thing!. Please, please capitalize every sentence, make sure you spell everything right, and use the words you meant to use!. It irritates me IMMENSELY when someone puts 'then' instead of 'than', or 'of' in the place of 'have'!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
omg i totally effin love it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i have felt like that before!. and i think its a wonderful poem!. he should b lucky to have u!.!.!.!.!.!.
I like it!. You keep you subject focused and the train of thought flowing!. Very nice, keep up the good workWww@QuestionHome@Com
I think it's cool (my girl friend hasn't done me any poem's a little bit sad) but that's coolWww@QuestionHome@Com
awwww (thats all i have to say lmao)Www@QuestionHome@Com
thats a really sweet poemWww@QuestionHome@Com