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Question: Internet poetry real poetry!? I believe it is, just as Da Da and Cubism are to painting and sculpture!. And you!?
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LATENT HATE

Where are you, my hate
my rage, my name caller…
Why do I cry at sorrow,
when I should be laughing cruelly with spit!?
What’s wrong with me!?

Where is my swath!?
My path of destruction…
Why is my wake not strewn with bodies!?

Who am I in the mirror—man!?
The one that won’t allow me to chew my food
and watch TV at the same time!?

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Who is Peter Benoit!?
Anyhow, I just got here and I think your poem is wierd!. It's pretty cool though I thinks I'll really like them!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Not familiar with this form, but I really like this a lot!. I can definitely pick up on the satire and sarcasm!. Sounds like the antagonist berating himself!. Love it!.


I guess I should point out that those who are "afraid to think" are the ones doling out comments like the ones above!. the irony
Not that I'm against a good critique, but please know something about poetry!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Poetry is of course not dependent on the medium used, but the skill of the writer!. In your case the skill exhibited is that of successfully presenting your insubstantial and empty words as delightful and brilliant, much thanks to those who are afraid to think or to be unpopular!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Where
Why
when
What’s
Where
My
Why
Who
And

What is wrong with this collection of words!?
You are being swallowed up in a boring structure!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I enjoyed it up until the last stanza!.!.!.Blessings YahooWww@QuestionHome@Com