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Question: One of my newest poems please comment!?
The sun crept up on me today
Its orange yellow like stained glass
In the muted sky sounding the battle cry of day,
Wiping sleep from murky eyes!.
I am alive again surviving nights constricting arms
And storm flavored kisses!.
I rise and greet my time with disdain
As do all dark Angels riding the treadmill
Of anxiety racing into the fiery sky and a life!.

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Nice!. A great vibe for 1:00 in the morning!. ;PWww@QuestionHome@Com