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Question: "i hate it all, i hated you!."!?
I told myself I wouldn’t cry
I never needed you by my side
And even though you were never there
Somehow I still wished that you would care

And that I was enough for you to try
Life’s not so bad if you just believe
But you chose the bottle over me
There was no way I could make you see

I hated you for so long
You took away so much from me
My childhood and every dream
The memories of you still stream
Through my mind when I try to sleep

Do even have the slightest clue!?
The scars you made and put me through
I hate it all, I hated you
You have no idea the things you doWww@QuestionHome@Com


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I really like it!. It has the rhythm of a song almost!. It's sad and sort of insightful!. It sounds personal and a bit held back!. The overall feeling is a little depressing, but i think it's best that wayWww@QuestionHome@Com

Not bad, not bad at all!. But it does kind of sound like a pop song, probably because of the rhymes!. But I found it interesting!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

It's more a song i think!Www@QuestionHome@Com

What's the question!?Www@QuestionHome@Com