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Question: Hows this for a poem!?
in the endless darkness
the past finds peace
in broken sunlight we find release
after dusk the blackness gathers
before the dawn nothing matters
seek the star steady in in the cold
find the light the future you holdWww@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
simply amazing!. and for the person who said it doesn't make any sense!.!. they abviously do not have the compasity to deeply and fully inderstand the meaning behind your words!. you have read them and let yourself take you to the place in which the words were created from!. with your poem it was so easy to do!. i can not describe the feeling i felt while reading this!. bravo is farthest away from and understatment there is!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

BRAVO!.!.!.!.I can't do poems for nothing!.

This one sounds really really good!.

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Not bad!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

it doesn't make sence what are you talking about!?Www@QuestionHome@Com

it's okWww@QuestionHome@Com