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Question: I don't know what this is, but i'd love your opinion!.!?
i dont even know how this happened!.!. my fingers just started typing this!.!. poem!? rant!? i'm not sure!. it was unbelievable really!. my hands had a life of their own!.

You cry, I watch!.
You laugh, I stand!.
Emotionless once again!.
I can not feel my heart beat anymore!.
What left inside I am not sure!.
Who I was, was once so clear!.
Who I am is far from here!.
I want to smile!.
I want to breathe!.
But every breath is far from reach!.
If only living was easy to teach!.
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wow!. thats an amazing poem!. jeeze i cant believe it just came to you! thats amazing its got a really deep meaning!. do you feel like that is true in your life sometimes!? wow thats really good!!!Www@QuestionHome@Com

that is so beautiful!.!.!. its so deep and thought-provoking!.!.!. i think its awesome!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

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