I cannot be what needs to be
to make your voice stop hurting me
i let you go, i did my part,
it's like a nail inside my heart!.
i really need to let you be
So i can stop hurting meWww@QuestionHome@Com
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to make your voice stop hurting me i let you go, i did my part, it's like a nail inside my heart!. i really need to let you be So i can stop hurting meWww@QuestionHome@Com Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: The last two lines are everlasting and full of wisdom ?Www@QuestionHome@Com Hello, I see this poem has pain in it because it talks about breaking up The first line sounded like the other person had high expectation of you wanting perfection As painful as it was you broke up telling her you will let her go Its like a nail inside my heart feels more like it was torn out!. You had to let her go so you can heal!. Www@QuestionHome@Com Absolutely beautiful!. Isn't it funny how such beauty can be born from such pain!? Keep writing, you have a natural talent!Www@QuestionHome@Com |