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Question: Friends yesterday i wrote a poem did u like!?!?!?!?!?!?
He is Bouncer,
The cute German Shepherd dog!.
At times becomes aggressive
But likes to play with a log!.

He has a long tail,
And drinks water in a pail!.
He is a faithful dog,
And never lets in the stranger, even if fat or tall!.

He is Bouncer,
The cute German Shepherd dog!.
Short in height;
But does great job at night!.

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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
wow im not into poetry but this was really good
and being that i used to have a german shepherd
try adding more to it
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The poem was too short, but i think that this is your first poem, while writing a poem try to make it little more attractiveWww@QuestionHome@Com

for some reason I like it, not enough to rave over, but I like it just the same!.

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its lovelyWww@QuestionHome@Com