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Question: Critique My New Poem: ShaSha Love Game !?
ShaSha is a loser

ShaSha is a loser in game of love

He does not aim right

and miss the shots

ShaSha should learn better

Watch the others

how they score

They have direct hit

and win the prize

ShaSha wisen up

ShaSha be smart

Jiji will devour you

and you will be

left with crumps
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