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Question: Again, again, I will say it again, and maybe this time I will catch some fish!?
These vile letters make
miscreant words but laughter
leaps from a kindled light, sorrow
swallows itself in a parched
and creased lip that lies skinned
in it’s flesh!. Eager
hunters
shape meat
in a dingy,
fishing
for attention’s gasp
and never
will it come!.
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You are brilliant!. Fishing and words as metaphors; I can't commend you enough for this poem!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Not sure why you wrote this poem,
It appears that you are wishing,
that someone will see,
that your words eagerly,
are referring to more than "fishing!."

If it is attention and response you seek,
than you have one on the "hook" I must say,
But now it looks, like it was one of the faulty hooks,
and I am "the one that got away!" *smile*
Have a great day!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Just when you thought it was safe to go into the water!.

Hark Hark Hark What`s that I hear The ticking of a clock, Not just any clock, It`s coming from the water!.

Excellent way with words about the fish, one is dying to know more after
and never
will it come

not chatting weighing up the pros and cons!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Could you repeat that!?
Because it's well worth repeating!.
Never mind, I'll read it again!.

Okay, I read it again!. Nice one!.
Fishing is all about waiting!. It will come, but if not, try another pond!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Heee, heeee quite nice!. Let's catch those fish and have a fish fry though!. Ummmmm, just love fresh caught fish over an open flame!. LOLWww@QuestionHome@Com

There once was a man from Peru
who fell asleep in his canoe!.
While dreaming of Venus
his played with his penis
and awoke with a canoe full of goo!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Don't be carvin up no fish in a danged dingy or ya'll just end up on the lake bottom!.A great day of fishin'!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Fishers of men somehow comes to mind here,,I have no idea why!.Take me fishing too,I can even bait and gut!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Just kill it and grill it already!

sheesh

And try no tot burn your boat!.

again!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I'm going to keep casting my line and keep the bait pail filled!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Do you write poetry while you are fishing!? Www@QuestionHome@Com

Nay, it has come for you!.

But so true for those of us
less talented
who futilely shape meat!.

ma

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I JUST SHARTED!!!!!!!!!!!!Www@QuestionHome@Com

I think you're gonna need a bigger boat!Www@QuestionHome@Com

I think there's enough fish out there for each of usWww@QuestionHome@Com

Beautiful!.!. I am a sucker for good poems!. Are you the author!?

LACD!.!. you are very good too!

MOG!.!. you are so tickling good!

and ma!.!. yours is so true!.!.!. sigh!Www@QuestionHome@Com

You've caught a fish!.!.!. A googly eyed, kilted black man fish of love!

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what!?Www@QuestionHome@Com