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AFTERNOON STORM
? 1993 TD Euwaite
Rain drops, a voice
Blue Clouds, a song
Torrent, a chorus
And Thunder, the drums
Matinee Showcase
By the window, it’s warm
Play me another, Afternoon Storm
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AFTERNOON STORM ? 1993 TD Euwaite Rain drops, a voice Blue Clouds, a song Torrent, a chorus And Thunder, the drums Matinee Showcase By the window, it’s warm Play me another, Afternoon Storm ***** Www@QuestionHome@Com Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: This is very pretty, and sensitive and to me romantic!. I always loved rainy indoor days nice for doing two things one was baking chocolate chip cookies! Cheers!Www@QuestionHome@Com This poem illustrates your long background in music!. The metaphor of storm as musician putting on a show for you "Matinee Showcase," engages the senses!. I like the image of the narrator warm and safe, viewing the storm as a song, accompanied by thunder as drums--as a positive, rather than a negative aspect of nature!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Whomever would say that you're "non-writing"!? I like this one, '93 must have been a good year!. Edit: (You should have shown this to CS last week!.)Www@QuestionHome@Com Nature's Ninth! I enjoy sitting at the window watching the afternoon storms come in!. Hurricanes and tropical storms!.!.!.well another story!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Storms really are music!.!.!.lovely song to soothe the troubled senses!.!.!.unless the winds make it an orchestral nightmare!Www@QuestionHome@Com Musical Weatherman!. What can you do with the sports results!? Good poem, most enjoyable!. Quality!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Nice little verse, but when you write another of your many howlers I'll be on your case!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Afternoons storms are my favorite sound!. There is something very mysterious about a stormy sky!. Love this poem!. Www@QuestionHome@Com There's a Trigee hiding in there!.!.!.!. (You are not a dork!. A dork is someone who goes around reporting your questions for no reason!.)Www@QuestionHome@Com You gave afternoon storm a merry melody!. Thanks for sharing, Maestro!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Nice choice of words, very visual scene painted here!.Www@QuestionHome@Com |