Is this an ODDquain??

Question: Is this an ODDquain!?!?

lost
thoughts jaded
perception tainted
can't see beyond what is felt
love

!.!.!.!.!.fine line!.!.!.!.!.

hate
toughts jaded
perception tainted
can't see beyond what is felt
lost

TemariWww@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

I don't know what you would classify it as, but I like it!.!.!.jaded thoughts, tainted perception!.!.!.this would blind ones sight to what is beyond!. Thanks for sharing!. NamasteWww@QuestionHome@Com

Good form and idea! I like the transformation between the two verses with matching interiors!.Www@QuestionHome@Com