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Question: Critique My New Poem: Fighting Death!?
Life is all about fighting death
It is amazing game
That has familiar end
Strive hard to delay the fate
Be healthy and follow the rules
Do your exercise
Jog and go on the tread mill
Eat healthy food
Vegetables ad fruits
You can have meat
to your heart desires
Not much cookies, cake and doughnuts
Do not scream for ice cream
You can have a scoop or more
Enjoy the opposite sex
All its trappings and pleasures
Life does not need
to be mundane and drab
Be careful and follow
The right decision
So when you meet your creator
You will go to heaven
And not be pushed to
You know!? hell
If you believe in cosmos
Pray that you will cruise
Safely in space
And not get sucked
In a black hole
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I really like this poem , it's sorta depressing at the end but I liked it!. It was really good!.

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