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Question: Would you like yet another Trigee!?
Waves!?!?

Love so true!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.Ocean clear blue
Hear my sighs!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.Unspoken passion
You rise again!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.Calmly glide
Into my heart!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.Until high tide
My soul you keep!.!.!.!.Rising
In ultimate!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.Passion
Rapture!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.ReturnsWww@QuestionHome@Com


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Reenie, what can I say except that I am jealous of you!? The internal rhyme is wonderful, the imagery and metaphor superb, the Trigee itself perfect!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Thanks for sharing this wonderful trigee!. I have a favorite part of the trigee!. It's!.!.!.!.!.!.

"Ocean clear blue
Unspoken passion
Calmly glide
Until high tide
Rising
Passion
Returns!."

Such a wonderful combination the ocean, and the emotion of passion make!. I wish to go lay on the sand now! I'll go there in my minds eye!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I read the left side!.!.!. wonderful
I read the right side!.!.!. wonderful
I read both sides across!.!.!. wonderful
Then to my total surprise, I read the left side then the right side in rapid succession!.!.!.!. EXCELLENT!!
Do we call this one a Quadgee!?
Or maybe Renee`gee!?
Or simply MoM of Marine strikes again!?
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I am honored, M!.O!.M!.!.!.!.The words!? I second EP's comments!. Just beautiful!. You have helped redeem me for my diatribe I posted to Mixtli's question about avatars!. Hydro hydro everywhere and not a drop to think !!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Would we like another Trigee, when you write them like you do, keep them coming girl!.You are the master!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

No one does a Trigee like you do!.!.!.This is wonderful, ditto Elaine about the internal rhyme!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

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how about 'Surfer's Cove' as a title Reenie!?

i think your really good at these trigs too!.Www@QuestionHome@Com