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Question: Would you please critique another Trigee, inspired by Reenie!?
Love Trigee
by C!.S!. Scotkin

A call………………Your voice
confirms…………!.!.!.speaks love
the date…………… so near
the wait…………… no fear
is short……………!.!. you’re here
you whispered……!. my love!.
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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
I have been in tears most of this evening!. No particular reason for it, just missing my boy!. This is WONDERFUL!
Thank you, fellow M!.o!.M!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I thought the standard was fourteen words, But I like your construction, the two verses and their interplay!. It's a very good write! Love returns with breathless hope!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

stupid!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.retarded
constipated!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.stupid thoughts
bugs!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.this is a stupid poem
you wrote!.!.!.!.!.!.I critiqued Www@QuestionHome@Com

It's short and sweet!. Good job!. I've yet to post a trigee!. I think I'm afraid of messing it all up!. lolWww@QuestionHome@Com

Fabulous!. Thank you, Reenie for inspiring C!.S!. I really like this form of poem!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Nice clean cut!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Ya did good!.Www@QuestionHome@Com