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He did it to save the world
Although our sanity began to unfold
For you he would cry
And we thought he would die
For his family he did this
But our lives weren't worth more than his
You see anything he would do
Just to come home and see you
Because you are our son
Therefore anything he would of done
Just to be here with his family
But wondering made him lose sanity

The army was his life
Even through tumult and strife
So just knowing he was happy
Stopped us being so snappy
Although we were full of tears
We have no more fears
Because he was a savior
A strong, brave warrior
If only you could of seen
What a great father he could of been

When he died his eyes were closed
Where his soul was enclosed
And his heart was open
His happiness would never deepen
He said he would donate
To help someone's life recreate
It was so like him
Being with him was never grim
He was so full of life
It was an honour to be his wife

And although he's dead and gone
He will always love you, son!.

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