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Question: Decisions, decisions!.!.!.!.Any comments please!?
As usual a journey started in my mind!.
Half sleeping in a days dream
I sauntered along a dirt path soon
Reaching a forked road I didn't mean to find!.

I gazed in wonder because of the choice
Of paths; not two, but three which confused an already
Confused mind!. I stood and stared with my low IQ,
But not too low, for what I saw was cause for rejoice!.

In deep contemplation I ran my hand unaware through
My wavy blonde hair; for one path was paved in gold,
Which, of course, would first catch the eye of any fool!.
The second road was the road my feet were on and I flew

From it towards the shiny stuff, hesitating when I saw soil
Covered by soft green fallen leaves with a beautiful
Canopy that appeared to be a mile long natural arbor!. This
Got the clockworks of my brain working, and after a little oil

(And not cheap) I was utterly confused of the path I should
Choose!. Gold I thought would turn me against those I love,
And I have never been rich!. I could be rich in nature, but maybe
I would end like Dante, and wasn't ready for a trip in hell!. I would

Make my decision according to the cards that were handed to me
In life!. I will remain barefooted on the dirt road and always be happy!.Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Yeah, nice beanie dude! Oh!.!.the poem!? Just a sec!.!.!.!.!.!.!.ok, I guess!. It's a tad full!. I like the short humorous stuff, so don't take it hard, ok!.Www@QuestionHome@Com