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Question: What u think of this poem!?
this is one i think i posted a while back but not sure just let me knoe what u think thanx


ive been thinking so much
my everyday life has become a blur
if u ask me what i did last week
i could'nt even reminisce
2 busy missing
my missed miss
thinking of that missed kiss
an regretting i ever thought i loved someone
who would make me feel
so good an so bad
girl
why did we meet
why were u so dam sweet
every time i think of u
my heart skips a beat
see this is what u do to meWww@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
It reads like lyrics to me!. Maybe hook up with someone who can put it to music and then (Romeo & Juliet style) stand under the girl's balcony and shout out to her!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I like it
Send it to her =]

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awesome did u write that!? it could be a song just add music!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

yeah pretty good,

and its cool to meet a guy who writes at all!.

mine!?

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your poem is very good and your emotions showed quite deeply throughout without going off message Www@QuestionHome@Com