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Question: Can you please read my poem!? PLEASE!?
This is a poem I wrote about this guy!.!.!.!.!.I'm not planning to give it to him!.!.!.!. but what do you think about it!?

Name of poem: "I Can't Take It Anymore"

I can’t take it anymore,
The pain that weakens me with every breath
With every heartbreak that I get
The way I feel when you don’t speak to me
The thoughts about you that I think
The way I can’t get you out my mind, heart, or soul
The way I feel when you speak to them
The way you ignore me
The lies that you said
The words that were said, just lies…
“I love you”
I believed you
I can’t take it anymore,
I wish you would speak to me!.
The way you speak to them!.
The words you told her,
“hello” you said,
but not to me
I knew you forgot about me
I can’t take it anymore,
Just reassure
That those things were true
That you do love me
That you didn’t forget about me!.
Say “hello” and make me feel safe
Because, I just, cant take it anymore
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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
i really like it, it's best for me!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

boo hoo give it to the dude and dont sign it and type it why so he has to think who did i do this to see now he might try to become a person instead of what he is now Www@QuestionHome@Com

Hello!.!.!.

Seems like a great poem, but what do i know, im not poem critic!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

You need to toughen up a!.!.!.seriously!.!.!.stop being such a broken ***!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I like it, Iv felt that way b4, been there b4, very good!. lolWww@QuestionHome@Com