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Question: Can you tell me what you think of my poem!?
and details and thoughts would be appreciated!. (the middle stanza kinda seems like a rap)


Truth

Forgotten people
Come undone
Problems of the world
Don’t go unsung
Ignorance
Into the wind be hurled
You know it’s real
It happens
It’s true
Don’t ignore it
It affects you too

Cancer, sickness, murder, and death
Live it out until your last breath
Embrace the truth
Except imperfection
We all need to help
If we want to change direction
Details of the world
Notice them too
There’s pieces to this puzzle
And one belongs to you

If you pay attention
And aren’t ignorant
Than the world won’t be suspended
On a net of sugar coated thoughts
To leave the truth to be ignored
And hit hard later
So think about it now
The people-less better off than you
Know that things are going on
That shouldn’t be allowed to
Truth!.

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