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Position:Home>Poetry> 10 points to read and rate my Short POEM, pleazzzzzzzzzzzzze!!!!?Question: 10 points to read and rate my Short POEM, pleazzzzzzzzzzzzze!!!!!? 'MUSIC'
'The sounds of nature, the words of thought It pierces the heart with a never ending love A never ending hate, a never ending cry It speaks to us all, through our soul and mind' (I think I'm better at short poems than long ones) Here is my new blog:http://aiiwriter!.blogspot!.com/ (if you do visit my blog, please tell me which one is the best, in order!. 1- the best and 3- the worse!.) Www@QuestionHome@Com Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: I like it!. Full of soul!. It is like Minimalism in art!. Speaks volumes without a lot of words!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Poetry needs to evoke more than tell!. You have the beginnings of a poet, but you need to work on economy of words!. For example, a little editing on this poem would result in something like this: Sounds of nature, Words of thought Pierce the heart with Endless love, Infinite hate!. An eternal cry, Enlightening Soul and mind!. Www@QuestionHome@Com music touches the heart and soul-it sounds pretty good,maybe you could make a little longer and rhyme also; could you rate some of my poems!? Thanks MikeWww@QuestionHome@Com The angel who died was a really good one in my opinion !. Www@QuestionHome@Com UmmWww@QuestionHome@Com |