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Question: Please COMMENT on my POEM, thanks!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!?
'THE ANGEL WHO DIED'
'The person who's near, who I always called friend
Was the person who cared, the person who loved
Helping out those in need she blessed'
She prayed for them as a last defense

Overwhelmed with joy and the faith of God
She thanked the Heaven and God above-
For receiving a kind, and nurtured heart
For giving her the love of many who love

For guiding her through the steps of life
For caring for her in despite-
Of being too proud when life gave
For getting too angry when she didn't get her way

She was always in peace and state of mind-
Who I never thought would ever die
The evil just grew and conquered her body
It caused her pain for loving and caring

I know, however, that she is safe
Helping the good above
She still helps out those here today
She is the angel who loves us all'
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I think its great!. Fabulous!.!.!.I personally would use a different title but I like it just as you have it!. Writing poetry is hard stuff, you have writing talent!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

wow, I like it!.!.!.

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Sounds like a great person who was overtaken by a bad circumstance!. Sorry to hear!. Good poem!. Please rate mine http://answers!.yahoo!.com/question/index;!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com