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Question: Critique my newest poem, "Ode to my Dog"!?
You are my dog and I love you very much!.
I love your waggy tail and the way you salivate!.
You bit me once but I didn't retaliate!.
You fetch all my sticks and give me wet kisses
You are the male made me forget all the bitches!.
Your coat is so shiny from your protein-rich diet!
(That dog food's expensive, but for you I'll buy it!.)
In summary, Grover, you are my friend,
My companion, my true love until the end!.

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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
that poem was queer!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

i don't have a pet, yet i admire pet lovers like you spending time to write a poem for pet!. if only your pet can read and understand it, he will retaliate with ba wow wow wow wow wow !. !. !. !. !. !.
but you're right, pets are great companions!Www@QuestionHome@Com

cool take a look at mine please:

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