Please rate my poem. whats a good tittle.?

Question: Please rate my poem!. whats a good tittle!.!?

dear god please help me
why do they hurt me
when i scream no one cares
when i cry no one comforts me
do the love me
do the really like me
why do they always yell at me
i'm scared god
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its ok, i pray its not from experience though!. a title is tricky, id go with something like

why god why

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On a scale of 1 to 10 , where 10 being the highest and one the lowest i would give it a 5 cuz it just show innocence and id call it "prayer"!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

My God, Please

thats is the title, read it all together!.!.!.

the poem is o!.k from 1-10 I would say a 7!. To Many gods he's name is also jahovah, massiah, Jesus,a nd you should mix or try it!. Good Luck!

Regards,
VictoriousWww@QuestionHome@Com

a good title would be ALONE because you say that no one hears, no ones care nd no one comforts you!. This is a really good poem!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

possible titles:

* Egocentricity Squared
* It's all about me
* Lament of the Toddler in a Shopping cart
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Your poem is good!.
In the middle part I think you meant to put "they" instead of "the"!.
I would call this poem "A Plea"Www@QuestionHome@Com

it's okay
how about "cry out for god" or "scared angel's prayer" or just "dear god please help me"Www@QuestionHome@Com

That's really good! 10 10 10 10 10!!!Www@QuestionHome@Com

teen life
alone
trapped inside
locked out
no one cares
please god
want to be loved

Great poem btw!!! :)Www@QuestionHome@Com

That's really good you should call it Dear god please help meWww@QuestionHome@Com

A Babies CryWww@QuestionHome@Com

That poem is a great 1 i would name it Why Me or Help meWww@QuestionHome@Com

Call it please help me

or!.!.!.

Dear godWww@QuestionHome@Com

Dear God are you there!?Www@QuestionHome@Com

its a 10/10Www@QuestionHome@Com

title cld be Why or Please!. i think its rlly rlly rllllllllllllllllllly good!!Www@QuestionHome@Com